domingo, 7 de abril de 2013

writing animals

                                          


                                     Skunks
                         (animals  endangered)


      
   
   
   Everybody who has seen this kind of animal feel scared, not only for its appearance,if not even for its nasty smell that produced. Nearly all skunks live in the Americas, and we can found most of them in Mexico.Usually found in undisturbed habitats, and also in agricultural aereas and grasslands.
     Skunks are opportunistic eaters with a varied diet. They eat fruit, plants, insects, larvae, eggs, reptiles,smalls mammals, and even fish. They generally hunt during the nights.
    Due to its restricted geographic range. The skunks are threatened destruction of its habitats, due to of human settlements and the increase in tourism that disturbing their enviroment.
  There are at least a protected area "the biosphere reserve Clamela" located on the coast of Jalisco, this place help to protect them because of the hunt, and they may live safely. Skunks have gotten a bad rap because of their defense mechanism but in fact, skunks actually help keep many insects, mice and other pets out of your yard and crops. "WE HAVE TO SEE THE GOOD SIDE OF SKUNKS AND TAKE CARE OF THEM, BECAUSE THEY ARE NECCESARY FOR OUR PLANET".


1 comentario:

  1. Mistakes
    Title: endengered animals
    Para 1: everybody FEELSSSS - smell that produceS -
    Para 3: The skunks are threatened destruction of its habitats, due to (of) human settlements and the increase in tourism that disturbing their enviroment???? NOT CLEAR!
    Para 4: ...this place HELPS to protect them from hunting.
    Para 3&4: present perfect tense missing
    Well done got B!

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